Post by orick on Jun 30, 2006 7:28:49 GMT -5
Code Word: Pirate
Full Name:Luke Rodak
Nickname: Orick
Age:15
Birthday: 26 of January
Origin: Southern Poland
Hair: Black
Eyes: Dark Brown
Height: 168 cm (about 5'5 feet)
Weight: 68 kg (about 143lbs)
Personality: Orick is a person, who very likes laughing. He is friendly and nice. But sometimes, when he gets angry, he can say something unpleasant…. He is also well known, because sometimes, his words hurts. He can offend someone, if he is angry. Orick prefers cold than hot and winter than summer. He thinks, that ice is a perfect element.
There is one holiness for him – Rules and Justice. He is always obeying the rules. But sometimes, if he must, or for a good fun, he uses his powers, for little cheat.
He has got motto; “What cannot kill us, it makes us stronger”.
He is from Poland, so he doesn’t know all of the customs in USA. He is very uptight, because of this situation.
Appearance: Orick is medium size, always smiling boy. He has got long (for a boy
) black hair, and dark, almost black, brown eyes. He is different from other people – He is from Poland, so he has Slav beauty.
Clothing Style: Orick likes black and blue clothes. In cold days, he is wearing navy blue jumper, and jeans. In hot days he usually wears his Grey shirt and shorts. He hates brand –name clothes, so he always cut the tag with names such as “Nike” or “Puma”.
Relations: Luke has one brother – Paul, he’s got 22 years old and he is studying in Warsaw, capitol of Poland. He doesn’t know anything, about his brother’s powers.
His Parent’s didn’t know that Orick is a mutant. But after some accident, they make a decision: Orick need to be safe. They send him to America, to join the Xavier’s school. In America, he doesn’t have any family or friends. He is all alone.
In Poland, he left his 14 years old girlfriend, Paulina… He still loves her and he doesn’t know, what would happen with them.
Powers: In Poland, they say “Hipnotyzer” for someone, like him. Orick can read the thoughts of others, and he can possess minds. So he is Psionic. When he gets concentrate, he can even make somebody to loss of consciousness, or bring about a headache. But his powers are weak. He can’t rule them, only sometimes, he can force somebody to, for example, go to the other room, or say something, what Orick wants. He knows the thoughts of the other persons only, when they are not concentrating, or when they think, they are safe. When is angry, or very frightened, everyone nearby got a headache. But he cant rule his powers, and he want to know, how to control them and use them better.
Affiliation: He is standing nearby of Xavier’s institute. He’d like to join it, because he heard, that he is the best Teacher. But he even doesn’t know that there are other teams.
Skills: Luke can… writing stories… He would like to be a writer or a journalist. When he has got nothing to do, he turns on the computer and… Write!
He also knows Polish. He was born in Poland, so he MUST know this language.
He is learning English, but he is only fifteen, so his English is bad, and he makes mistakes, specially, with tenses.
He knows German, but only the basics.
He fights very well, but only with… Long, Wooden, or metal Staff. Friends say that with branch in his hand, Orick is like “Rambo”.
Orick like to use his reading in mind power, to know, what the people are thinking about him, or to cheat, when he is playing some games.
Weakness:
Orick don’t know English very good, so sometimes, he can’t understand what people are talking about.
He can’t fight very well. He is not strong, he hasn't got muscles – He is not a type for a warrior or a super hero.
He is very honest and he is always saying, what he is thinking. Usually, is bad for him.
He is very susceptible to stress. When he is working under the pressure, he can bungle everything in easy way.
Interests: Orick like reading books, newspapers and writing. Writing, but on the computer, because of his handwriting is awful. He also like playing football, but in the European version, or volleyball. Playing the cards, like poker or something, is also his hobby. He loves bicycles. He can ride the whole day, and he will never be tired. Orick like to listen to music. Rock Music, like Placebo, Dave Mathews, Alanis Morissette, Green Day and so more!
History:
Luke was born in Southern Poland, in a small village. He was always in the shadow of his brothers, Paul, who was learning very good, and gets the best marks in school. His parents always say “You need to learn like Paul!” or “Paul in your age…”. For Orick, it was the most annoying thing. He was studying like his brother, sometimes better, but the parents always were looking only at Paul’s achievements.
When Orick was 12, his life has changed. He was sitting in the school, writing something, when he heard some whispers… They were getting louder and louder… At last, he screamed with fear, and the teacher took him to the nurse… But the nurse didn’t recognize the illness. Orick went to his home, thinking, what the whispers could be.
The situation repeated next week. But then, Orick has concentrated on the whispers… He recognize, that the whispers… Are the thoughts of his teacher. Orick was very happy, because of his new skill. He used it everywhere. He didn’t know all thoughts – He could feel only the essence of the thoughts – But for Orick, who was always thirsty of magic, powers etc. it was a great power. Nobody knew about Orick’s gift. He didn’t say anything, to anyone.
After a year, when Luke was sitting in the park, and was boring, he saw a little girl. She was sitting on a grass, and playing with her dolls. Orick watched it with smile. But then, he saw something strange. One of the dolls has exploded. Girl started to cry. Her parents went to her, and they started to scream. On the girl’s hand, there ware small fireballs. After a minute, some men in strange uniforms took the girl to the car. The girl disappears, and the parents started to cry. Orick was terrified. One of the strange men said something like “Don’t worry; she is not the only mutant in this region. But we will capture everybody, I swear.”
Luke grasped everything… He was also a mutant…
His other powers Luke has discovered on his school trip. When they were walking through the cave, Orick noticed a strange, small man, who was walking by his class. Orick was looking at him. When the trip reached the dark cave, where there was no light, Luke sense some bad thoughts. He recognizes the thoughts of this strange man. He was trying to steal his friend’s money. But Orick didn’t know where the victim of robbery is. So he was just repeating in his mind “Leave him alone, leave him alone…Or just die!” Scream has broken the silence. Then, someone turn the light on. The strange man was lying on the floor. He was fainted. Orick touched his forehead.
He has known his new powers... Now, he can control the minds of others. His enemies can fall asleep, if he wants. He can sense their minds…
He is a Psycho.
His parents discovered his gift, when he was 14. When they were having a dinner, his parents were talking about him, his school and marks. The told, that he has to learn better. Orick lose control about his powers. His eyes were looking like two, blue wisps. His parents fall asleep. Orick was very tired… When they woke up, they have only one target: To help Luke.
They knew that he is a mutant, so they tried to find somebody, who can help Orick.
The finally found Xavier’s Institute. They bought a ticket for Orick. Luke has said goodbye to his family, and his girlfriend, Paulina, and flied to the America.
Sample Post:
It was cold night. The moon was shining and its light was falling on the teenager’s face. Moon was reflecting in his brown eyes.
Orick was walking by the street. He saw the Institute, behind the trees. The moon was shining. Orick smiled.
“So, I am here” He walked to the gate. It was huge. Orick swallowed…
“Cholera” – he said in his Polish Language – “It is…” He didn’t say the rest. The gates opened.
“Hah, someone is expecting me?” He said, passing the gates. He looked around, and noticed the basketball pitch.
“Oh, basketball” he said with bored voice. “I hate this game… I wonder, if they have a volleyball pitch, or football?” He looked around and noticed the light in the Institute.
“It’s very big” He said, with his strange accent “How many people are learning in it?”
He walked through the Garden, treading on the path. He stopped, when he noticed some flowers.
“Oh... What’s that? A strange flower, a have never seen something like that?” He touched the petals. They were very delicate. “My little” He smiled and stands up. He has got a hunch that someone is looking at him.
“Hmm… Who’s there?” He asked, looking into the darkness. “Who are you?”
He touched his forehead and close his eyes… he used his powers, to sense any mind nearby.
“I cannot sense anyone” He said calmly. But he looked around once again.
“They are looking at me, I know it…” He said when he was walking by the path. “So I have to be fast… Maybe they are waiting for me?” He fought. Then he looked at the light in the house. The doors were getting closer and closer… “What should I do now? It’s my first day; I can’t make a wrong impression about me”. He swallowed once again. He felt, that his bag is getting heavier, and he is sweating. “It’s a cold night, why am I sweating?” He said quietly. “Because you are a bundle of nerves” He answered himself. He was standing in front of the doors.
“Now, my life is going to change, I can feel it” He said, when he was knocking the door.
The sound of knocking has broken the silence. Orick looked at the moon
“It’s a song to say goodbye” He singed quietly “A song to say goodbye, for my old life”
Full Name:Luke Rodak
Nickname: Orick
Age:15
Birthday: 26 of January
Origin: Southern Poland
Hair: Black
Eyes: Dark Brown
Height: 168 cm (about 5'5 feet)
Weight: 68 kg (about 143lbs)
Personality: Orick is a person, who very likes laughing. He is friendly and nice. But sometimes, when he gets angry, he can say something unpleasant…. He is also well known, because sometimes, his words hurts. He can offend someone, if he is angry. Orick prefers cold than hot and winter than summer. He thinks, that ice is a perfect element.
There is one holiness for him – Rules and Justice. He is always obeying the rules. But sometimes, if he must, or for a good fun, he uses his powers, for little cheat.
He has got motto; “What cannot kill us, it makes us stronger”.
He is from Poland, so he doesn’t know all of the customs in USA. He is very uptight, because of this situation.
Appearance: Orick is medium size, always smiling boy. He has got long (for a boy
) black hair, and dark, almost black, brown eyes. He is different from other people – He is from Poland, so he has Slav beauty.Clothing Style: Orick likes black and blue clothes. In cold days, he is wearing navy blue jumper, and jeans. In hot days he usually wears his Grey shirt and shorts. He hates brand –name clothes, so he always cut the tag with names such as “Nike” or “Puma”.
Relations: Luke has one brother – Paul, he’s got 22 years old and he is studying in Warsaw, capitol of Poland. He doesn’t know anything, about his brother’s powers.
His Parent’s didn’t know that Orick is a mutant. But after some accident, they make a decision: Orick need to be safe. They send him to America, to join the Xavier’s school. In America, he doesn’t have any family or friends. He is all alone.
In Poland, he left his 14 years old girlfriend, Paulina… He still loves her and he doesn’t know, what would happen with them.
Powers: In Poland, they say “Hipnotyzer” for someone, like him. Orick can read the thoughts of others, and he can possess minds. So he is Psionic. When he gets concentrate, he can even make somebody to loss of consciousness, or bring about a headache. But his powers are weak. He can’t rule them, only sometimes, he can force somebody to, for example, go to the other room, or say something, what Orick wants. He knows the thoughts of the other persons only, when they are not concentrating, or when they think, they are safe. When is angry, or very frightened, everyone nearby got a headache. But he cant rule his powers, and he want to know, how to control them and use them better.
Affiliation: He is standing nearby of Xavier’s institute. He’d like to join it, because he heard, that he is the best Teacher. But he even doesn’t know that there are other teams.
Skills: Luke can… writing stories… He would like to be a writer or a journalist. When he has got nothing to do, he turns on the computer and… Write!
He also knows Polish. He was born in Poland, so he MUST know this language.
He is learning English, but he is only fifteen, so his English is bad, and he makes mistakes, specially, with tenses.
He knows German, but only the basics.
He fights very well, but only with… Long, Wooden, or metal Staff. Friends say that with branch in his hand, Orick is like “Rambo”.
Orick like to use his reading in mind power, to know, what the people are thinking about him, or to cheat, when he is playing some games.
Weakness:
Orick don’t know English very good, so sometimes, he can’t understand what people are talking about.
He can’t fight very well. He is not strong, he hasn't got muscles – He is not a type for a warrior or a super hero.
He is very honest and he is always saying, what he is thinking. Usually, is bad for him.
He is very susceptible to stress. When he is working under the pressure, he can bungle everything in easy way.
Interests: Orick like reading books, newspapers and writing. Writing, but on the computer, because of his handwriting is awful. He also like playing football, but in the European version, or volleyball. Playing the cards, like poker or something, is also his hobby. He loves bicycles. He can ride the whole day, and he will never be tired. Orick like to listen to music. Rock Music, like Placebo, Dave Mathews, Alanis Morissette, Green Day and so more!
History:
Luke was born in Southern Poland, in a small village. He was always in the shadow of his brothers, Paul, who was learning very good, and gets the best marks in school. His parents always say “You need to learn like Paul!” or “Paul in your age…”. For Orick, it was the most annoying thing. He was studying like his brother, sometimes better, but the parents always were looking only at Paul’s achievements.
When Orick was 12, his life has changed. He was sitting in the school, writing something, when he heard some whispers… They were getting louder and louder… At last, he screamed with fear, and the teacher took him to the nurse… But the nurse didn’t recognize the illness. Orick went to his home, thinking, what the whispers could be.
The situation repeated next week. But then, Orick has concentrated on the whispers… He recognize, that the whispers… Are the thoughts of his teacher. Orick was very happy, because of his new skill. He used it everywhere. He didn’t know all thoughts – He could feel only the essence of the thoughts – But for Orick, who was always thirsty of magic, powers etc. it was a great power. Nobody knew about Orick’s gift. He didn’t say anything, to anyone.
After a year, when Luke was sitting in the park, and was boring, he saw a little girl. She was sitting on a grass, and playing with her dolls. Orick watched it with smile. But then, he saw something strange. One of the dolls has exploded. Girl started to cry. Her parents went to her, and they started to scream. On the girl’s hand, there ware small fireballs. After a minute, some men in strange uniforms took the girl to the car. The girl disappears, and the parents started to cry. Orick was terrified. One of the strange men said something like “Don’t worry; she is not the only mutant in this region. But we will capture everybody, I swear.”
Luke grasped everything… He was also a mutant…
His other powers Luke has discovered on his school trip. When they were walking through the cave, Orick noticed a strange, small man, who was walking by his class. Orick was looking at him. When the trip reached the dark cave, where there was no light, Luke sense some bad thoughts. He recognizes the thoughts of this strange man. He was trying to steal his friend’s money. But Orick didn’t know where the victim of robbery is. So he was just repeating in his mind “Leave him alone, leave him alone…Or just die!” Scream has broken the silence. Then, someone turn the light on. The strange man was lying on the floor. He was fainted. Orick touched his forehead.
He has known his new powers... Now, he can control the minds of others. His enemies can fall asleep, if he wants. He can sense their minds…
He is a Psycho.
His parents discovered his gift, when he was 14. When they were having a dinner, his parents were talking about him, his school and marks. The told, that he has to learn better. Orick lose control about his powers. His eyes were looking like two, blue wisps. His parents fall asleep. Orick was very tired… When they woke up, they have only one target: To help Luke.
They knew that he is a mutant, so they tried to find somebody, who can help Orick.
The finally found Xavier’s Institute. They bought a ticket for Orick. Luke has said goodbye to his family, and his girlfriend, Paulina, and flied to the America.
Sample Post:
It was cold night. The moon was shining and its light was falling on the teenager’s face. Moon was reflecting in his brown eyes.
Orick was walking by the street. He saw the Institute, behind the trees. The moon was shining. Orick smiled.
“So, I am here” He walked to the gate. It was huge. Orick swallowed…
“Cholera” – he said in his Polish Language – “It is…” He didn’t say the rest. The gates opened.
“Hah, someone is expecting me?” He said, passing the gates. He looked around, and noticed the basketball pitch.
“Oh, basketball” he said with bored voice. “I hate this game… I wonder, if they have a volleyball pitch, or football?” He looked around and noticed the light in the Institute.
“It’s very big” He said, with his strange accent “How many people are learning in it?”
He walked through the Garden, treading on the path. He stopped, when he noticed some flowers.
“Oh... What’s that? A strange flower, a have never seen something like that?” He touched the petals. They were very delicate. “My little” He smiled and stands up. He has got a hunch that someone is looking at him.
“Hmm… Who’s there?” He asked, looking into the darkness. “Who are you?”
He touched his forehead and close his eyes… he used his powers, to sense any mind nearby.
“I cannot sense anyone” He said calmly. But he looked around once again.
“They are looking at me, I know it…” He said when he was walking by the path. “So I have to be fast… Maybe they are waiting for me?” He fought. Then he looked at the light in the house. The doors were getting closer and closer… “What should I do now? It’s my first day; I can’t make a wrong impression about me”. He swallowed once again. He felt, that his bag is getting heavier, and he is sweating. “It’s a cold night, why am I sweating?” He said quietly. “Because you are a bundle of nerves” He answered himself. He was standing in front of the doors.
“Now, my life is going to change, I can feel it” He said, when he was knocking the door.
The sound of knocking has broken the silence. Orick looked at the moon
“It’s a song to say goodbye” He singed quietly “A song to say goodbye, for my old life”
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