Post by adeadsoul on Jun 14, 2006 23:16:01 GMT -5
Full Name:Alanna phipps
Codename:Lonestar
Age:16
Hair color:Brown
Eye color:green
Height:5'6''
Weight:150
Personality: (Two Paragraphs or detailed list)
She comes across as wild, outgoing and unpredictable. She's got a sweet disposition, not one to be rude to a stranger. Though, her years as a child with a abusive father and unweary to the outside world made her not people friendly.
That doesn't mean she'll let you walk all over her, she also has an attitude problem. If you mess with her she's liable to lose her temper. She's learned to act away her real feelings and grin and bare life. Apathetic anyone? She has a bad habit of letting things build up...and then blowing up. She adores horses, they keep her sane and gives her a will to keep her life.
Appearance: (picture or description and name of actor/actress you want)Genevieve Cortese
Relations:?
Powers:She can become invisable, and create force fields, though are not invisible, though, most are naturally they are. Her weaknesses are, she cannot defend herself, just has offense, she doesn't like to lose, but will except a fair beaten battle.
Affiliation(Xavier's, Brotherhood, Star, Independent):Independent
Skills:Can horsebackride, play any sport, and succeed, playing her heart out.
Interests:The only things that keep her sane are horses, playing sports, and learning about her powers
Bio/History: (At least two well-thought-out paragraphs)
Alanna grew up in San Fransisco with her mother, father, and her goodie-too-shoes brother. Her brother, Zach, was perfect at everything and always got all the attention of their father. The only attention Alanna tended to get was getting beat or harassed or when she used her powers to do some good or to help her mother when she was being beaten. Her mother was the only thing that stood between Alanna and her father's beatings, and she was hardly ever home. Her mother was a pilot, so while she was flying around the world, Alanna was stuck in their crammed apartment with Zach, her father, and her father's beer. Her father would come home in his happy moods once in a while and alanna would pray that it would last forever. Though, it lasted for an hour. When he was in a cranky mood, she would go into her room, which was about as big as a postage stamp, with only one window for at least a breath of fresh air and hide under her covers, if you can call them that.
When her mother found out about her father beating her she was sent here, to mingle with other people that would understand her. She didn't know how people would treat her here, hopefully accept her the was she was, though, her being people deprived, she wouldn't speak unless spoken to. She thinks about the future a lot, especially not knowing what might come out of it. She doesn't try to think of her past, though it comes to haunt her often.
*Example Post: (200 words minimum, please, just to let us get a feel on how you write)
Alanna sits in the car awaiting to leave her family. Although their is love in her mother, but it was time to leave. leave her father. leave her brother, and leave the only love there ever was. leaving the family she though. the tears never come out. she was glad they didn't.
the car neared the school. brooke's mother was crying. her father on the other hand sat. he sat stern. Alanna stood and gave her mother a hug. she would miss her. she walked over to her brother, zach. zach too was unhappy about loosing his sister, but he was holding back the tears. they hugged. Brooke walked over to her father who was still sitting in the car. he looked out the window. she saw the hate in his eyes, but yet there was sorrow. would he miss her, or would he move on like before? She got into the care, not knowing what would happen to her. Or how would she be able to use her powers or control them. She sighed, scared to see the future. She knew that she should go somewhere to get help, she needed lots of it. She looked behind at her mother until she was out of sight. She started to cry, but didn't show it, she would probaly get hit if she did.
Codename:Lonestar
Age:16
Hair color:Brown
Eye color:green
Height:5'6''
Weight:150
Personality: (Two Paragraphs or detailed list)
She comes across as wild, outgoing and unpredictable. She's got a sweet disposition, not one to be rude to a stranger. Though, her years as a child with a abusive father and unweary to the outside world made her not people friendly.
That doesn't mean she'll let you walk all over her, she also has an attitude problem. If you mess with her she's liable to lose her temper. She's learned to act away her real feelings and grin and bare life. Apathetic anyone? She has a bad habit of letting things build up...and then blowing up. She adores horses, they keep her sane and gives her a will to keep her life.
Appearance: (picture or description and name of actor/actress you want)Genevieve Cortese
Relations:?
Powers:She can become invisable, and create force fields, though are not invisible, though, most are naturally they are. Her weaknesses are, she cannot defend herself, just has offense, she doesn't like to lose, but will except a fair beaten battle.
Affiliation(Xavier's, Brotherhood, Star, Independent):Independent
Skills:Can horsebackride, play any sport, and succeed, playing her heart out.
Interests:The only things that keep her sane are horses, playing sports, and learning about her powers
Bio/History: (At least two well-thought-out paragraphs)
Alanna grew up in San Fransisco with her mother, father, and her goodie-too-shoes brother. Her brother, Zach, was perfect at everything and always got all the attention of their father. The only attention Alanna tended to get was getting beat or harassed or when she used her powers to do some good or to help her mother when she was being beaten. Her mother was the only thing that stood between Alanna and her father's beatings, and she was hardly ever home. Her mother was a pilot, so while she was flying around the world, Alanna was stuck in their crammed apartment with Zach, her father, and her father's beer. Her father would come home in his happy moods once in a while and alanna would pray that it would last forever. Though, it lasted for an hour. When he was in a cranky mood, she would go into her room, which was about as big as a postage stamp, with only one window for at least a breath of fresh air and hide under her covers, if you can call them that.
When her mother found out about her father beating her she was sent here, to mingle with other people that would understand her. She didn't know how people would treat her here, hopefully accept her the was she was, though, her being people deprived, she wouldn't speak unless spoken to. She thinks about the future a lot, especially not knowing what might come out of it. She doesn't try to think of her past, though it comes to haunt her often.
*Example Post: (200 words minimum, please, just to let us get a feel on how you write)
Alanna sits in the car awaiting to leave her family. Although their is love in her mother, but it was time to leave. leave her father. leave her brother, and leave the only love there ever was. leaving the family she though. the tears never come out. she was glad they didn't.
the car neared the school. brooke's mother was crying. her father on the other hand sat. he sat stern. Alanna stood and gave her mother a hug. she would miss her. she walked over to her brother, zach. zach too was unhappy about loosing his sister, but he was holding back the tears. they hugged. Brooke walked over to her father who was still sitting in the car. he looked out the window. she saw the hate in his eyes, but yet there was sorrow. would he miss her, or would he move on like before? She got into the care, not knowing what would happen to her. Or how would she be able to use her powers or control them. She sighed, scared to see the future. She knew that she should go somewhere to get help, she needed lots of it. She looked behind at her mother until she was out of sight. She started to cry, but didn't show it, she would probaly get hit if she did.